that are often far
from any version of reality
these sights don't
match my vigilance
but insight vengeance
and vain thoughts
but I do not support
irreverence
because these experiences
because these experiences
let me venture
from places unknown
to worlds untold
I am invigorated
to worlds untold
I am invigorated
by the possibilities
and intoxicated with these synergies
that connect me to an alternative life
so as my vices and the shrill voices
sometimes offset my vibes
making it so intense
and intoxicated with these synergies
that connect me to an alternative life
so as my vices and the shrill voices
sometimes offset my vibes
making it so intense
that I become valiant
and versatile
I cherish these sights
and though vague and repetitive
they make me want to visit
some new place
where the vultures
feed on nightmares
and the velocity of nature
is variegated by the vernacular
valued by the villagers
and vaulted from virtuality
into reality
© Linette Rabsatt
valued by the villagers
and vaulted from virtuality
into reality
© Linette Rabsatt
2 comments:
Hi Knots.
Awesome!
".....they make me want to visit
some new place
where the vultures
feed on nightmares......""
Your poetic expression beautifully captures the dynamic interplay between vivid visions and the complexities of reality. The juxtaposition of different emotions and experiences, from invigoration to intensity, and the sense of adventure in exploring the unknown, all contribute to the depth of your writing. The use of alliteration and wordplay enhances the rhythmic flow of the piece, creating a captivating journey through your thoughts. The final lines resonate strongly, underscoring the transformation of ideas from the virtual realm into the tangible world. Overall, your review delves into the intricacies of your experiences and paints a vivid picture for the reader.
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