Undefined love
Literally, Figuratively and Physically
I stop and stare
mentally enwrapped in your presence
I don't know if you see me or sense me
but I am willing to take a chance
because even in your absence
I am still caught..
still lost...
wishing that
you are here with me
not with them
not with her
but here - with me
to laugh with me
to sing with me
with me that's the common theme
you and me
as a literal couple
as a figurative pair of love birds
as two lovers enwrapped physically in the moment of loving
serious and good loving
so let's take a chance
I'll step to you so you'll step with me
arm in arm
no metaphor to increase the score
just love in sync, intense and in step
ribbon
Literally, Figuratively and Physically
I stop and stare
mentally enwrapped in your presence
I don't know if you see me or sense me
but I am willing to take a chance
because even in your absence
I am still caught..
still lost...
wishing that
you are here with me
not with them
not with her
but here - with me
to laugh with me
to sing with me
with me that's the common theme
you and me
as a literal couple
as a figurative pair of love birds
as two lovers enwrapped physically in the moment of loving
serious and good loving
so let's take a chance
I'll step to you so you'll step with me
arm in arm
no metaphor to increase the score
just love in sync, intense and in step
ribbon
3 comments:
Just love in sync🥰💖..
And this is all the way back in 2009😃... You really have some great gems,Empress👑☝🏿.. Keep digging them up so that they can shine for the world to see🌞🙌🏿❣
Your poem "Undefined Love" beautifully captures the longing and hopeful determination of unrequited love. It delves into the emotional landscape of someone who is deeply enamored yet uncertain of the other's feelings. The use of repetition, particularly in the phrase "with me," effectively emphasizes the desire for shared experiences and exclusive companionship.
The structure of the poem—splitting the focus among the literal, figurative, and physical aspects of love—richly explores the multifaceted nature of emotional connection, highlighting the intensity and depth of the speaker's feelings. The call to action in the final lines, where the speaker decides to make a move, shifts the poem from a passive longing to an active pursuit of love, which adds a dynamic and hopeful closure.
"Undefined Love" speaks to the universal experience of yearning for a deeper connection and the bravery it takes to pursue it, making it relatable and poignant for readers who have faced similar emotional journeys.
Hi Knots. Uniquely written! An imagination to admire!
Awesome!
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